Hi Mong, ngomik versi 4 sudah dirilis lho. Cobain dan kasih masukan ya.
Serangan Fajar

Serangan Fajar

Fajar hanyalah seorang pelajar yatim piatu yang berjualan Koran untuk memenuhi kebutuhan hidupnya, sampai suatu saat Aki Jamin, seorang penjual es Doger keliling membuat seluruh hidupnya berubah

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Zettoxchange 2015-03-29 15:12:13

This is good just until page 9 ...
Even though its good to have an explanation , but you overdo it !!
You just insert one page full of dialogue . especially that page 10 . I skip that one page . It's nice to keep things simple so the reader understand ! Or I think you could combine the two chapters and add something to smoothen them ..

 
Zettoxchange 2015-03-29 15:01:11

This is good . The action effect is pro , and the background Is yet another good point of this chapter .
But you should be careful about the Place you put something into so that would not confuse the readers (Kayak gerobak es doger tadi) . And Im more interested in the character development of the main protagonist . If you refine this chapter , It's worth to have some magazine editorial take a look on this

Nice plot btw !

 
Bunda Sabiq 2014-11-22 23:40:01

mong aki itu nama aslinya siapa sih tulisannya gaje

 
Ukha Martha 2014-10-29 11:49:37

di chapter 1 ada bagian yg ga ke scan sempurna mong.

 
Tovan Dio 2014-10-21 00:49:09

chapter 2 keren mong, cuma satu yg kurang action kurang banyak.. hehe
di tunggu kelanjutannya

 
Jul Lee 2014-10-17 03:06:21

Dan ternyata mereka adalah Satpol PP sodara-sodara :o

lanjot terus kaaang

 
Yuya Indou 2014-10-12 20:47:35

suka banget sama komik ini.bakalan ane subscribe.. saya tunggu kelanjutannya mong . .

 
Yuya Indou 2014-10-12 17:18:44

komiknya keren banget mong.. mana ni updateannya . .

 
Reza Fikriansyah 2014-10-06 14:47:13

WOOOOOOOOOW mantap...! gila keren banget dah.. jangan lama lama updatenya gan hahaha

 
Tovan Dio 2014-10-04 04:55:40

jirr si AKI JAMIN Badassss banget mongg.. di tunggu lanjutannya

 
Amsal Samuel 2014-10-02 23:43:12

pake render model 3d ya mong? bagus tuh keren banget... plot twist ternyata si aki manusia super

 
Jul Lee 2014-10-02 22:41:13

Pas liat judulnya kirain genre drama gitu...ternyata Aksi banget

lanjutkaaaannnn!

 
Novian Kurnia 2014-10-02 17:13:50

anjrittt ... si aki keren gilakk .. awkawkwakawk